Monday, October 5, 2009

From the blog box...

We've started something new in Mr. Fitch's class. Students have the option, when they are done with their work, to write something for Mrs. Griffin's blog box. She'll pick a few at the end of the week to post to the blog. This week the prompt asked students to describe an imaginary place using their senses. Here we go...

From W.W.
One day I woke up in candyland.
First of all I was swimming I chocolet.
Scondly I was jumpping on the marshmelose. Also, I was eating It.
Finilly I was walking and I got stuck in jello.

From L.P.
My imaginary place is full of money land. It smells like peoples pocket. I was so hungry I ate a dollar bill It was disgusting. Then I took ten dollars and went home. That was the best day ever. Then the next day I went back to money land. That was all about money land.

From J.M.
Today im going to tell you about money land. First of all, it smells like peoples pockets. You can hear change all over. The sound is loud. I would fly in a jet to money land. It is green all over. I will go to Mexico with the money and get a suvernear. That is how money land is.

1 comment:

  1. Great pharagraph construction guys! Candyland sounds like great fun. Mmmm, chocolate.

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